Post by CASPER on Feb 26, 2005 16:44:02 GMT -5
Jak , Dark Jak, Torn & Daxter are not my characters
&
I make no claim upon them.
But as challenged to pare the Ego & Id
of , Jak & Dark Jak..
I submit :"Dark moment"
[/center]Separated from his loyal mates by a 3 beast fire team of Metal Heads & an uncomfortable span of open ground, Jak sprints with all the ballz out bravado he can muster..
He is in the open... Daxter & torn are pinned down in the ruined water reclamation plant some 100 yards away.
Jak knows he is on his own...
frustrated Jak thinks to himself "Daxter dose not get to touch my map again..
ever !!!
*This was intended to be a simple reckon, but Against Torns stern advice Jak defiantly had allowed Daxter the honor of plotting the missions rout...
Jak realizes now " he should have picked his power plays more carfuly, in the back of his mind he knows the decision to support Daxters insistant rant about a "Flawless plan" had less to do with Daxer & more with a response to the fact Torn had been aloof & a bit to domineering of late..
Never the less Jak finds himself panting out a quiet prayer to his friends "Take care of each other"..
Jaks world suddenly turns a bloody red, he hears a distant "BRRRaaakkkka",
The sent of burnt ozone & elven flesh is unmisstakabel...
The Metal Heads shot had struck Jack just as he aproched a cluster of burnt out land vehicles... The blast carried his body forward up & over the wreaks where he lands with a crumpling thud..
Jaks skull & flapping jaws makes an audable, "clack A snakk", noise
as it strikes the unyealding metal frame of a "once upon a time" assault
craft....
But soon the red light in Jaks mind bleeds away, replaced by bluish white..
A dark sardonic voice demands of Jak "See what your friends have wrought upon you now ? They would see us dead... They manipulated you Jako!
Jak answears his Dark half without speaking " No.. they care for me"..
Dark Jak screams in his head "liar ! Damn yer weakness.. They seek in all things
to control you.. They will not let us be free.." Jak mutters "no.. No,
they are my friends , I, I love them..."
The light fades more & more becoming a steely blue .. Jaks world is seen as a high contrast negative image..
Jak feels the Dark voice close in his ear... It taunts him " Look at your
self Jako... Sprawled in the oily dirt, bleeding out, body & soul.. Why? Because you have been weak!.. I am your only real friend.. Embrace me Jak.. Torn is condisending & Daxer is more trouble than his worth".... Jak shakes his head, tears running down his cheaks, His
vision growing ever darker in the blue light.
Jaks world seems hallow, every thing is cast into contrasting outlines
& shallow, as the image of a blue print...
Dark Jak wraps his arms & flowing tentical like wings about the soul weary Jak...
The specters voice becomes Jaks own as he shouts in rage " LIVE !!!"
"KILL MURDER KILL BLOODLUST KILL !!!"
Jak smiles with unholy glee, Rapture more perfect than sex consumes him , Jak surrenders to the passion...
They are 1, Jak is become, Dark Jak...
Blue fire ignites in his eyes, surrounding him,
spreading though his veins like an uncut drug...
Dark Jak Rises like a phenoix above the wreckage ..
There he hovers as 1 united being, an Angel of dark light with hatred & bloodlust circling his head like a Demons halo..
Dark Jak gathers forces more primal than life from all the world & the very air it's self... & then he is unleashed...
The Blue hell storm casts long shadows across the clearing, framing the Metal Heads in it's neon glow...
Blinded, the unwhitting beasts seek to guard their eyes from the light death has now cast upon them...
Torn & Daxter are compelled to watch in horror as Dark Jaks vengeance is unfolded upon the Metal Heads with such furry that it can only be discribed with one word,
& , That, Word, is, SIN.....
Dark Jak howls at the heavens... "None will be spared" !
Jak is truly his at long last & together they will reap such havoc as to unmake creation...
The world goes black..
Jak opens his eyes coved in blood, weeping from the depth of his soul...
He is on his knees. Torn & Daxers arms embrace him with all the passion any spirit could possess...
Their love had saved the world & broken the spell of one dark moment..
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